Thursday, September 2, 2010

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Our Modern inventions have saved us and killed at the same time. Modern technology has increased our material wealth but has had a negative impact on our health.
To what extent do you agree?
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The science and technology revolution in the later part of 20th century influenced dramatically our societies by its own significant achievements which have been exciting and applying in almost our everyday-activities. It can be seen clearly that modern innovations are making our lives more convenient and easier than ever. However, it is also a fact that modern inventions have negative impact on our health at the same time.
First of all, medical innovations save  lives from serious diseases and pains. For instance, a variety of drugs and new medical treatments for heart diseases is the most convincing example. However certain innovation in chemistry have been used  to make weapons some of which are mass destruction in capacity during the World War II and beyond. As a result terrible consequences are left behind for the future generations.
Secondly, the innovations which enabled  mass production have helped produce a huge amount of consumer goods for the consumption of the society. Those in agriculture are the best example since they have helped improved the life of virtually everyone in the world .  Unfortunately, the quality and quantity are not often come together in a product because businessmen seem to focus on benefit rather than fine goods. Therefore, there are some kinds of low quality foods included harmful components are increasing day by day which affect directly  our daily health.
In conclusion, discoveries and innovations are what humanbeing do. There is a great number of people, myself included, agree with the statement that our innovations are have saved and killed us at the same time. Cau nay duoc roi, hoac co the viet la:
(However, negative impact on our life can be found alongside positive one as examples above illustrated.)  

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